Things I Learned in Writing Class This Semester (Part I) November 22, 2010Posted by pacejmiller in On Writing, Study.
Tags: Cosmo Kramer, creative writing, editing, editor, first draft, journalism, structural editing, structure, Writers Resources, Writing, Writing and Editing, writing class
My blistering year of writing and learning has finally come to a close. Now it’s time to reflect.
Contrary to what a lot of people say, writing courses can be helpful for budding writers. It’s not necessarily just learning the technical skills (which are of course important) — there are also many aspects of the business you can be exposed to. This term, I did quite a bit of non-fiction and journalistic writing, as well as editing, subjects I originally thought would be quite dry — but it’s turned out to be the complete opposite. As Cosmo Kramer once said, “I’m loving every minute of it!”
Here are some things I learned this semester (in no particular order):
Get a good editor
If my classes have taught me anything this semester, it’s that getting a good editor is one of the most important things a writer should put at the top of their list. Even the most brilliant writer can use a good editor because editing is a different skill. It’s not just picking up the typos and the spelling and grammar errors — everything from word use, dialogue, characters, structure, tone, style, voice — everything you can think of, can benefit from having an editor cast their eye over it.
I used to think if I spent enough time on something by myself, locked away in a room somewhere, I’ll eventually get it perfect. Now I realize how silly that was.
Writing is all about structuring
I’ve never had much of a problem coming up with ideas and racking up the words, but what I found out the hard way this semester was how important structure is to writing. Sometimes, just moving a few words or sentences around will completely change the shape and tone of a paragraph, or even the entire piece.
I used to think as long as you get whatever you want to write out of your system then everything else will take care of itself, but that cannot be further away from the truth. Now, especially for non-fiction pieces, I spend most of my time figuring out how I will structure the writing before I write a single word, and then hours and hours restructuring it after I’ve written everything.
My main problem is that I waste too much time procrastinating over the structure before I start writing. Sometimes you just need to get it all out and then trim it back and mould it into shape. But then again, if I don’t structure it enough beforehand, I don’t know where to start when staring down at 6,000 words and knowing that I have to cut it down to 2,000! It’s a dilemma.
Writing a good first draft is important
People say the first draft is almost always shit, but it doesn’t really matter because you’ll fix it up anyway. The key objective is just to write it out so you have something tangible to work with. I’ve discovered this semester that this is not necessarily always the case. Writing a good first draft, while not imperative, is highly beneficial.
Once the first draft has been written, I find it very difficult to decide what to cut out, what to add, what to replace. Clearly, the better the draft, the more difficult it is, but even crappy first drafts can get a little tricky. It’s not easy coming up with a different way to say or structure things when it’s already laid out right there in front of you, especially if there’s nothing visibly or obviously defective about it.
So I say put in a bit more effort into that first draft, think it through more. In my opinion it’s worth it.
More to come!